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在医院看望一位死去的长者

2014-08-12 01:27:00| 分类： 3）周塬诗友佳作 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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在医院看望一位死去的长者

极目千年

感觉你此刻才是幸福的
山矮下来，庄稼长势良好
晨鸡暮狗各安其职
儿孙们节日般的相聚
围着你，像一群采蜜的精灵

感觉你只是离开了自己的身体
像我的
每一首诗

周塬欣赏：作品里，死亡不再是一种悲哀，循入到自然的规律；生命归于圆寂是一种幸福，走过生命的时光，大自然依然辽远空旷，延续的生命面对长者的离去得到更为丰富的感悟；结尾写得形象而深刻，把长者的逝去比喻成每一首诗的诞生而离开他的身体，美化了生命和人的心灵！视角独特，内心的感悟深刻。

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